You know the story I’m writing right? Penguin-Naters: Book 1? Well if you’ve been reading it, I had written a scene in Chapter 10, it is a fighting-scene with blood & that. And that scene got removed by a Webmaster on the Wiki, so I am posting it here….
Chapter 10: Removed Fight Scene!
Electro slung out his sword, he didn’t really like the plain name ”Subtle”, so thought quickly and re-named it as a word in Silentete, ”Electrik-Kaoviouos”, meaning ”Electric Shock” and hit the guard in it’s chest. Rawk-Chawk then knew what to do, and slung his right & left arms of, freeing themselves.
“Guards!” shouted Sygoph. “Attack!”. The six had more problems. Snow-Bunny got out her ”Stripe-Whip” and attacked the coming-guards, Snow-Bunny found out it had eternal-length, but it looked like it was 3 metres. She tied up six guards onto a pole, slithering round the six guards, then it looked like the length had doubled, and cut the middle by itself, giving another ”Stripe-Whip”.
U.S. got out his ”Pyhson Needle”, pressed the ”Poison” button and poisoned several guards. It left only five more. Electro used his ”Telekinesis” and swung two guards in the air and threw them out the window, into the sea. Rawk-Chawk flung out his ”Boomerang Knife” and targeted two guards, he threw the knife, cutting their necks, and the knife flew back into Rawk-Chawk’s palm, leaving only one more. Electro finished him off with a cut, and there seven penguin’s stood in a room, full with blood.
“TOPZ!” yelled Electro. “Get out the ”Truth-Teller”!”. Topz did what he was told, then followed up what to do, he pointed the point at Sygoph, and asked “”Where is the Golden Goblet””
Sygoph really looked like he wouldn’t tell, but had to. “It’s hidden in a secret place in my tower in the ”Land of Destroyers”, but you’ll NEVER find it” and managed a weak cackle.
“I’m gonna kill him” said Rawk-Chawk, and walked over to Sygoph when Electro stopped him.
“No! You can’t, just leave him, he’ll be useful for us.”. And they all walked out of the room, leaving Sygoph, evil-laughing to himself in the room filed with blood & chaos……..
Keep on reading here. And comment what you think 
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Ninjinian
pup320
A very good scene!!